The Song Of The Sundari Tree
We were born in the long-forgotten days of Yore
Way before any human had ever walked this shore
We are the children of the boundless sea,
The unique and lovely mangrove forests of Sundari.
It is in the Tide Country’s mud that we dwell
All around us countless rivers swell
We dance to the daily rhythms of ebb and flow
We hold the land through tides high and low.
In those days the forests teemed with life
Jungle’s law prevailed without strife
In rivers, fish, crabs and dolphins would play
Tiger roars were heard any time of day.
Then one day the humans came to find
These lands had much to keep their pockets lined
So Sunderbans became the property
Of the esteemed East India Company.
So people rushed in here like seafoam
And thousands came to call the islands home
Along the rivers bunds and huts were built
Civilisations blossomed from the silt.
The forests that were the tiger’s territory
Were harvested for rich timber and honey
Fish found themselves in the Fisherman’s net
Who caught their fill before the sun had set.
And thus that old struggle again began
Between the forces of Animal and Man
Every day brought dangers anew
On both sides, the number of casualties grew.
But life goes on even amid strife
People farmed and fished and built themselves a life
The State brought in their system of law
As we mangroves kept looking on in awe
Then making people cry and rivers laugh
The British left by slicing the land in half
Regimes changed and new countries saw their dawn
But life in the Sunderbans simply carried on.
But we could hear the bells of danger ring
Not long after we started to feel the sting
Of the poison that polluted the rivers’ flow
Our dolphin friends were some of the first to go.
Winds grew harsh and the waters rough
And living here every day grew tough
Breaking the bunds salt waters would rush in
More and more new cyclones joined the din
Fish grew scarce and poverty more
As Nature fought back to settle the score
But still, more and more people continued to come
The number of forests cut down was truly dreadsome.
Then the vengeful sea started to rise
Bringing whole islands down to their demise
Farmlands were gone and people were left homeless
But we had only started to feel the stress.
Today we look in utter despair
As humans wreck the Earth without a care
It is Man’s arrogance and greed
That has sown our destruction’s seed.
We shout and shout but no one seems to hear
As we watch our homelands disappear
All we knew seemed to grow ever strange
Under the strain of increasing climate change.
But we say to you who will listen to our song
There is still time to try and right this wrong
Unless you open your eyes to its true worth
You will not be able to save this Earth.
We hope and pray that one day you shall see
The wisdom held by these old Sundari.
The Sundarbans have supported more than just human life for millennia and if we do our part, they will continue to do so. This poem brings to light the injustice that has been meted out by humans and warns us to take action on the climate crisis issue. A very evocative work!
ReplyDeleteAmazing work done by both the author and the artist. Your poem about the Sundarbans is truly wonderful. It paints a vivid picture of nature and people mixing together, showing the beauty of the forests and how humans changed things. The artwork is very accurate and expressive as well. It's a special and powerful story you've shared.
DeleteBeautiful! The words and the artwork alike. Incredibly evocative and informative, I love how the timeline has been laid out in verse, with the illustrations highlighting the visuals. I hope this reaches a wide audience and people really take the message to heart.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful! ❤️
ReplyDeleteThis is exceptional work beautiful writing and amazing paintings, very creative π✅
ReplyDeleteSuperb combination of script & drawings really awesome. ❤️
ReplyDeleteI love this soooo much. Reminds me sooo much of Amitav Ghosh’s works. The writing undoubtedly is outstanding, but the illustrations are equally stunning. This is a beautiful piece of work.
ReplyDeleteExcellent...
ReplyDeleteIn the heart of the wild, where rivers converge,
ReplyDeleteA blog post on Sunderbans did truly emerge.
With words like a river, it flowed so serene,
Painting a picture of nature's grand scene.
The mangrove expanse, a mystical sight,
Where tigers roam freely, with power and might.
The author's words danced like leaves in the breeze,
Describing this place with such grace and ease.
The tales of the fauna, the birds, and the trees,
Brought alive by the writer, like a gentle sea breeze.
The photos they shared, so vivid and clear,
Elevated the post, made it truly sincere.
It's not just a blog, it's a journey, you see,
Through the wonders of nature, the Sunderban decree.
A heartfelt appreciation for this post so divine,
For taking us on a trip where rare treasures shine.
In the realm of blogs, this one's a gem,
A lyrical ode to the Sunderbans, and them.
For sharing this story, we're grateful and more,
A masterpiece written from the heart's very core.
Wonderfully commented!
DeleteSuch a beautiful comment. Thank you so much for reading and commenting ! -Jhelum
DeleteVery expressive writing and drawing. Truly addressed the subject of Sundarban.
ReplyDeleteExcellent thoughts and presentation. The illustration is also awesome. Keep it up.
ReplyDeleteExcellent articulation and superb illustrations! Kudos to the duo
ReplyDeleteTimely and powerful tale by the very talented brother sister duo
ReplyDeleteThis is a beautiful piece of art ❤️ The poem speaks so truly of the reality of Sundarbans. It itself illustrates the story through its beautiful words. The visuals amplify the experience even further. They have a very unique style true to the rustic emotion of the poem…
ReplyDeleteBoth are artists in true sense.
ReplyDeleteThis is just mesmerising. Awesome poem along with the paintings. Very very expressive. Says the real day picture of Sunderbans. Kudos to both. God Speed!!
ReplyDeleteIt is so beautiful !!
ReplyDeleteHistory n the mangroves captured in art & verse !
Keep writing, keep sketching! ❤
Rakesh Dutta
ReplyDeleteRakesh Dutta
ReplyDeleteI haven’t seen such detailed work for very long time it has soul
ReplyDeleteWithin the words
Heart touching and beautifully written π I wish all people on this planet realise and right the wrong π
ReplyDeleteA brilliant composition along with exemplary appropriate illustrations. I hope this beautiful piece of work reaches the mass and kindle awareness among them so that they refrain themselves from such immoral act.
ReplyDeleteExcellent writing as well as drawing
ReplyDeleteTale of Sundari trees beautifully penned down, while the vivid sketches rightly enhances the mood set by the author... The topic has been addressed in a very lucid manner that requires a serious consideration!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written and illustrated.
ReplyDeleteExcellent πππ❤️ππ₯°..koyel & rishiπ₯°π❤️π
ReplyDeleteSagar
DeleteHeart touching ♥️
ReplyDeleteExcellentπππ
ReplyDeleteA beautiful eco poem and illustration by Jhelum & Rishi. Very mature style, contemporary theme. A tribute to nature & life on the planet.
ReplyDeleteBah. Very well put up. Now it is on us, your uncles and seniors to act to restore and safekeep the World Heritage Site.
ReplyDeleteHeartfelt π«
ReplyDeleteA symphony of words and images. Loved it.
ReplyDeleteWonderfully written and excellentiy and vividly sketched! Kudos to the talented brother and sister team for this beautiful presentation.
ReplyDeleteHeartiest congratulations.
ReplyDeleteHeartiest Congratulations
DeleteAmazing story! Superb drawing....just mind blowing!
ReplyDeleteThe writing indeed is good, but the illustrations are too good. God bless you both.❤️❤️❤️
ReplyDeleteThe writing is superb but with the drawing and illustration it is taken to a whole new level
ReplyDeleteTruely a good piece of two artists....
Excellent content and pictures mind blowing God bless you.
ReplyDeleteA poignant reality illustrated beautifully via words and color. Both outstanding in content and reach
ReplyDeleteGreat piece of work by both author and artist. Simply amazed
ReplyDeleteKaustubh: Let world think in your way. A beautiful narrative supported by a beautiful illustration. Kudos to the duo.
ReplyDeleteWhat a great piece of art and writing work … keep it up
ReplyDeleteVery mature and well written article. Articulates clearly the way we have destroyed the eco systems in our quest for commercial gains.
ReplyDeleteSo sensible ! Very nice
ReplyDeleteThe environment is in crisis.The poem and the illustration is simply beautiful.Climate change is affecting adversely our society, but the young people are to suffer most due to this crisis.It is encouraging that young generation has raised this issue.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully penned alongwith equally amazing illustrations. A thought provoking piece of art.
ReplyDeleteOshadharon! Jemni kobita temni chhobi
ReplyDeleteStory telling at its best- A beautiful piece of poetry telling the life story of the forest -and how we humans play a big tole in its conservation. The poetry along with beautifully painted pictures captured the essence and importance of forest and its preservation so well. Not only children but adults will love it. Waiting for it to be published!!!
ReplyDeleteNothing less than a masterpiece.
ReplyDeleteI shall remain extremely grateful for being granted this opportunity to illustrate such a wonderful poem. I am sure that this poem will inspire many a mind to learn about the beautiful ecosystem of the Sundarbans.
ReplyDeleteLoved the piece and the art as well. Really encapsulates the story of Sundarbans, with its histories and emotions that one finds. Great work.
ReplyDeleteVery beautifully expressed. Took me to the times and touched deep within. Unless we save our planet, it may be only a story to be read and imagined.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the images too it really a great combination. Keep it up.
Wow!! Such a wonderful duo. Great work Jhelum and Rishi. Came out really well
ReplyDeleteWow! Such a wonderful due. Great work Jhelum and Rishi. Came out really well.
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